Narrator summoning thread
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Marq Mooton
Samurel Manderly
Ser Raynald Dulver
Ser Walton Dulver
Luecian LongBow
Maester Colton
Benedict Marsten
Septon Arlyn
Riackard
Yoren longshore
Daveth Coldbrook
Kevan Lyras
Ser Jorah Holt
Theomore Tullison
Loreia
Baelon Drakeson
Derrock Swann
Nathaniel Mason
Lady Corrine Marsten
Jon Cobb
Dunstan Tullison
Athelstan
Gwyneth Drakeson
Reader
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
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Quite interested to see how this turns out, if you have a moment
Besides, who doesn't love seeing to greens fighting? Although in a fight my money is on Nathan, he is a dirty boy :;
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Also very interesting political implications. With the Septon arguing for a swift merciful death yet against the law, while Nathan is pushing for punishment in line with the law, yet fewer killed. Which is more merciful?
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Quite interested to see how this turns out, if you have a moment
Besides, who doesn't love seeing to greens fighting? Although in a fight my money is on Nathan, he is a dirty boy :;
):
Also very interesting political implications. With the Septon arguing for a swift merciful death yet against the law, while Nathan is pushing for punishment in line with the law, yet fewer killed. Which is more merciful?
Septon Arlyn- Posts : 2410
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Will get to this likely Sunday AM, heading out for tea. Sorry!
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Need a response here... then Corrine and I can make investigation rolls and take a tour of the affected areas.
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Need a response here... then Corrine and I can make investigation rolls and take a tour of the affected areas.
Nathaniel Mason- Posts : 1551
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Nathan, will try to get to this plus your argument with our Septon and Brother Turpin tomorrow. Kick me on Wednesday if I've still not done it.
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Arranging a Reunion
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Still currently in our meeting with Adham Daleford. Jorah has a question for him.
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Still currently in our meeting with Adham Daleford. Jorah has a question for him.
Loreia- Posts : 2556
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What is it about me coming up against the scary ones?
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What is it about me coming up against the scary ones?
Yoren longshore- Posts : 2376
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Psh. Haig's a big teddybear.
Baelon Drakeson- Posts : 4306
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Sent you a PM about negotiations with Benji and Myles, Only the Young thread.
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Another thread, this just requires the narrator approval.
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Another thread, this just requires the narrator approval.
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Kinda am old thread, just need some brothers input
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Just let us know if Luecian's plan works /if there is a bear or 2 ect. Thanks
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Kinda am old thread, just need some brothers input
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Just let us know if Luecian's plan works /if there is a bear or 2 ect. Thanks
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Septon Arlyn- Posts : 2410
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Quick Reminder on the below thread
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Luecian LongBow- Posts : 814
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I know you're super busy, but any chance of rumors for Day 5 and 6?
Gwyneth Drakeson- Posts : 2808
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Not on the critical path, but when you have time, I'd like to get [url=this intrigue][/url] started.
Daveth Coldbrook- Posts : 2004
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Gwyneth Drakeson wrote:I know you're super busy, but any chance of rumors for Day 5 and 6?
Very sorry these were missing, thought I'd posted them.
A few more to follow once I've wrapped up events and reviewed some threads, but might not happen until post Christmas.
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
little reminder
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Ser Walton Dulver- Posts : 918
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Reader's last post indicated what you need to do. You need to rewrite the whole thing. PM Reader if you need help rewriting, but the thread can't progress until you fix it.
Lady Corrine Marsten- Posts : 6275
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Lady Corrine Marsten wrote:
Reader's last post indicated what you need to do. You need to rewrite the whole thing. PM Reader if you need help rewriting, but the thread can't progress until you fix it.
it's already rewritten
Ser Walton Dulver- Posts : 918
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Ser Walton Dulver wrote:Lady Corrine Marsten wrote:
Reader's last post indicated what you need to do. You need to rewrite the whole thing. PM Reader if you need help rewriting, but the thread can't progress until you fix it.
it's already rewritten
You still haven't removed Ser Myles' parts or put in standard grammar. Both are things Reader said in his post you needed to deal with.
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
if now it's not good, then I don't know already
Ser Walton Dulver- Posts : 918
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Ser Walton Dulver wrote:if now it's not good, then I don't know already
It's quite simple. Read what Reader said. It's not good because you're writing actions for an NPC who is not yours. You can't write on Ser Myles' behalf, as he is Reader's character to control. You need to delete that second post altogether, and take out everything except Walton's direct actions, speech, and thoughts from the first post (mechanical stuff like rolls stay, obviously).
You also need to use inverted commas for all speech lines, because that's basic grammar. Reader has asked for proper speech notation several times. It's a bare minimum requirement for this group, and it's easy. If you can't do it, then this isn't the game for you.
Lady Corrine Marsten- Posts : 6275
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Re: Narrator summoning thread
Lady Corrine Marsten wrote:Ser Walton Dulver wrote:if now it's not good, then I don't know already
It's quite simple. Read what Reader said. It's not good because you're writing actions for an NPC who is not yours. You can't write on Ser Myles' behalf, as he is Reader's character to control. You need to delete that second post altogether, and take out everything except Walton's direct actions, speech, and thoughts from the first post (mechanical stuff like rolls stay, obviously).
You also need to use inverted commas for all speech lines, because that's basic grammar. Reader has asked for proper speech notation several times. It's a bare minimum requirement for this group, and it's easy. If you can't do it, then this isn't the game for you.
Thanks Corrine.
Everyone here has different standards of English (hell, I grew up near Glasgow, so I'm much weaker than many of those with English as a second language!), but we can all do our part on grammar to make things easy to read.
NPC stuff is mainly just to stop a slippery slope of people directing my characters: even things that seem innocuous can lead to other people pushing things further. I'll review the thread and see what shape it's in and get things moving there!
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